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As published
42 References to public places in existing enactments.
(1) This section applies to any enactment which—
(a) is contained in an Act passed before or in the same Session as this Act, and
(b) relates to things done, or omitted to be done, in public places or places to which the public have access.
(2) Regulations may provide that, in determining for the purposes of any specified enactment to which this section applies whether a place is a public place or a place to which the public have access, the right conferred by section 2(1), or access by virtue of that right, is to be disregarded, either generally or in prescribed cases.
Your change, as a redline
42 References to public places in existing enactments.
(1) This section applies to any enactment which—
(a) is contained in an Act passed before or in the same Session as this Act, and
(b) relates to things done, or omitted to be done, in public places or places to which the public have access.
(2) Regulations may provide that, in determining for the purposes of any specified enactment to which this section applies whether a place is a public place or a place to which the public have access, the right conferred by section 2(1), or access by virtue of that right, is to be disregarded, either generally or in prescribed cases.
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