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As published
17 The person responsible
(1) Section 17 of the 1990 Act (the person responsible) is amended as follows.
(2) In subsection (1)(c)—
(a) for “and embryos” substitute “ , embryos and human admixed embryos ”, and
(b) for “or embryos” substitute “ , embryos or human admixed embryos ”.
(3) Omit subsection (3) (which defines “the nominal licensee”).
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17 The person responsible
(1) Section 17 of the 1990 Act (the person responsible) is amended as follows.
(2) In subsection (1)(c)—
(a) for “and embryos” substitute “ , embryos and human admixed embryos ”, and
(b) for “or embryos” substitute “ , embryos or human admixed embryos ”.
(3) Omit subsection (3) (which defines “the nominal licensee”).
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