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33 Tenant’s right to treat notice to quit part of holding as notice to quit entire holding.
Where there is given to the tenant of an agricultural holding a notice to quit part of the holding, being such a notice as is rendered valid by the last foregoing section, then, if the tenant, within twenty-eight days after the giving of the notice, or, in a case where the operation of the notice depends on any proceedings under the foregoing provisions of this Act, within twenty-eight days after the time when it is determined that the notice has effect, gives to the landlord a counter-notice in writing to the effect that he accepts the notice to quit as a notice to quit the entire holding given by the landlord to take effect at the same time as the original notice, the notice to quit shall have effect accordingly.
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33 Tenant’s right to treat notice to quit part of holding as notice to quit entire holding.
Where there is given to the tenant of an agricultural holding a notice to quit part of the holding, being such a notice as is rendered valid by the last foregoing section, then, if the tenant, within twenty-eight days after the giving of the notice, or, in a case where the operation of the notice depends on any proceedings under the foregoing provisions of this Act, within twenty-eight days after the time when it is determined that the notice has effect, gives to the landlord a counter-notice in writing to the effect that he accepts the notice to quit as a notice to quit the entire holding given by the landlord to take effect at the same time as the original notice, the notice to quit shall have effect accordingly.
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