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As published
53 Compensation in respect of temporary pasture.
The tenant shall be entitled to compensation under this Act in respect of the new improvement specified in paragraph 33 of the First Schedule to this Act, being the laying down of temporary pasture in accordance with that paragraph, notwithstanding that the laying down or the leaving at the termination of the tenancy of such pasture is in contravention of the terms of the lease or of any agreement made by the tenant respecting the method of cropping the arable lands; but in ascertaining the amount of the compensation the arbiter shall take into account any injury to, or deterioration of, the holding due to the contravention except in so far as the landlord has recovered damages in respect of such injury or deterioration.
Your change, as a redline
53 Compensation in respect of temporary pasture.
The tenant shall be entitled to compensation under this Act in respect of the new improvement specified in paragraph 33 of the First Schedule to this Act, being the laying down of temporary pasture in accordance with that paragraph, notwithstanding that the laying down or the leaving at the termination of the tenancy of such pasture is in contravention of the terms of the lease or of any agreement made by the tenant respecting the method of cropping the arable lands; but in ascertaining the amount of the compensation the arbiter shall take into account any injury to, or deterioration of, the holding due to the contravention except in so far as the landlord has recovered damages in respect of such injury or deterioration.
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