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69 Manner in which disclosure notice may be given
(1) This section provides for the manner in which a disclosure notice may be given under section 62.
(2) The notice may be given to a person by—
(a) delivering it to him,
(b) leaving it at his proper address,
(c) sending it by post to him at that address.
(3) The notice may be given—
(a) in the case of a body corporate, to the secretary or clerk of that body;
(b) in the case of a partnership, to a partner or a person having the control or management of the partnership business;
(c) in the case of an unincorporated association (other than a partnership), to an officer of the association.
(4) For the purposes of this section and section 7 of the Interpretation Act 1978 (c. 30) (service of documents by post) in its application to this section, the proper address of a person is his usual or last-known address (whether residential or otherwise), except that—
(a) in the case of a body corporate or its secretary or clerk, it is the address of the registered office of that body or its principal office in the United Kingdom,
(b) in the case of a partnership, a partner or a person having the control or management of the partnership business, it is that of the principal office of the partnership in the United Kingdom, and
(c) in the case of an unincorporated association (other than a partnership) or an officer of the association, it is that of the principal office of the association in the United Kingdom.
(5) This section does not apply to Scotland.
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69 Manner in which disclosure notice may be given
(1) This section provides for the manner in which a disclosure notice may be given under section 62.
(2) The notice may be given to a person by—
(a) delivering it to him,
(b) leaving it at his proper address,
(c) sending it by post to him at that address.
(3) The notice may be given—
(a) in the case of a body corporate, to the secretary or clerk of that body;
(b) in the case of a partnership, to a partner or a person having the control or management of the partnership business;
(c) in the case of an unincorporated association (other than a partnership), to an officer of the association.
(4) For the purposes of this section and section 7 of the Interpretation Act 1978 (c. 30) (service of documents by post) in its application to this section, the proper address of a person is his usual or last-known address (whether residential or otherwise), except that—
(a) in the case of a body corporate or its secretary or clerk, it is the address of the registered office of that body or its principal office in the United Kingdom,
(b) in the case of a partnership, a partner or a person having the control or management of the partnership business, it is that of the principal office of the partnership in the United Kingdom, and
(c) in the case of an unincorporated association (other than a partnership) or an officer of the association, it is that of the principal office of the association in the United Kingdom.
(5) This section does not apply to Scotland.
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