Write the words of this act the way you think they should read. Solon shows your change as a redline against the published text and pins it to that exact text, so it can never be applied to wording you did not see.
Change 1
As published
23K Meaning of “document” etc
(1) In sections 23B to 23J of this Act, references to a “document” include—
(a) any thing in which information of any description is recorded; and
(b) any part of such a thing.
(2) Where a production order or a Revenue and Customs warrant applies to a document in electronic or magnetic form, the order or, as the case may be, the warrant requires the person having possession or control of the document to deliver or, as the case may be, give access to the information in a form which is visible and legible and, if the officer executing the order or warrant wishes to remove it, in a form which can be removed.
Your change, as a redline
23K Meaning of “document” etc
(1) In sections 23B to 23J of this Act, references to a “document” include—
(a) any thing in which information of any description is recorded; and
(b) any part of such a thing.
(2) Where a production order or a Revenue and Customs warrant applies to a document in electronic or magnetic form, the order or, as the case may be, the warrant requires the person having possession or control of the document to deliver or, as the case may be, give access to the information in a form which is visible and legible and, if the officer executing the order or warrant wishes to remove it, in a form which can be removed.
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Who it helps, what it costs, what it fixes. It is what persuades people to support it.
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