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4 Remuneration and allowances.
The Department may pay—
(a) to members of the Tribunal, other than the President and Vice-President, such remuneration, fees and allowances, and
(b) to any other persons, such allowances for the purposes of, or in connection with, their attendance at the Tribunal,
as the Department may, with the consent of the Department of Finance and Personnel, determine.
Your change, as a redline
4 Remuneration and allowances.
The Department may pay—
(a) to members of the Tribunal, other than the President and Vice-President, such remuneration, fees and allowances, and
(b) to any other persons, such allowances for the purposes of, or in connection with, their attendance at the Tribunal,
as the Department may, with the consent of the Department of Finance and Personnel, determine.
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