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As published
35 Registration of additional services
(1) Subsection (2) applies if—
(a) a person is registered in the DVS register,
(b) the person applies for their entry in the register to be amended to record additional digital verification services that the person provides in accordance with the DVS trust framework,
(c) the person holds a certificate from an accredited conformity assessment body certifying that the person provides the additional services in accordance with the DVS trust framework,
(d) the application complies with any requirements imposed by a determination under section 38, and
(e) the person complies with any regulations under section 39(1) requiring a fee to be paid.
(2) The Secretary of State must amend the DVS register to record that the person is also registered in respect of the additional services referred to in subsection (1).
(3) If the conditions in paragraphs (a) to (e) of subsection (1) are not met, the Secretary of State may not amend the DVS register as described in subsection (2).
(4) For the purposes of subsection (1)(c), a certificate is to be ignored if—
(a) it has expired in accordance with its terms,
(b) it has been withdrawn by the body that issued it, or
(c) it is required to be ignored by reason of provision included in the DVS trust framework under section 28(8).
Your change, as a redline
35 Registration of additional services
(1) Subsection (2) applies if—
(a) a person is registered in the DVS register,
(b) the person applies for their entry in the register to be amended to record additional digital verification services that the person provides in accordance with the DVS trust framework,
(c) the person holds a certificate from an accredited conformity assessment body certifying that the person provides the additional services in accordance with the DVS trust framework,
(d) the application complies with any requirements imposed by a determination under section 38, and
(e) the person complies with any regulations under section 39(1) requiring a fee to be paid.
(2) The Secretary of State must amend the DVS register to record that the person is also registered in respect of the additional services referred to in subsection (1).
(3) If the conditions in paragraphs (a) to (e) of subsection (1) are not met, the Secretary of State may not amend the DVS register as described in subsection (2).
(4) For the purposes of subsection (1)(c), a certificate is to be ignored if—
(a) it has expired in accordance with its terms,
(b) it has been withdrawn by the body that issued it, or
(c) it is required to be ignored by reason of provision included in the DVS trust framework under section 28(8).
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