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As published
74 Disabilities of directors of public transport companies.
(1) A director of a public transport company who is paid for acting as such or is an employee of the public transport company or a subsidiary of the public transport company shall be disqualified for being elected or being a member—
(a) of any council who are that company’s controlling authority; or
(b) where that company’s controlling authority are a composite authority, of any of the component councils.
(2) Where a public transport company’s controlling authority are an Integrated Transport Authority for an integrated transport area in England and Wales, a director of that company who is paid for acting as such or is an employee of that company or a subsidiary of that company shall be disqualified for being appointed or being a member of that Integrated Transport Authority.
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(13) The provisions of this section shall apply in relation to a director of a subsidiary of a public transport company as they apply in relation to a director of such a company.
Your change, as a redline
74 Disabilities of directors of public transport companies.
(1) A director of a public transport company who is paid for acting as such or is an employee of the public transport company or a subsidiary of the public transport company shall be disqualified for being elected or being a member—
(a) of any council who are that company’s controlling authority; or
(b) where that company’s controlling authority are a composite authority, of any of the component councils.
(2) Where a public transport company’s controlling authority are an Integrated Transport Authority for an integrated transport area in England and Wales, a director of that company who is paid for acting as such or is an employee of that company or a subsidiary of that company shall be disqualified for being appointed or being a member of that Integrated Transport Authority.
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(13) The provisions of this section shall apply in relation to a director of a subsidiary of a public transport company as they apply in relation to a director of such a company.
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