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As published
129 Application of Act to members of transitional classes.
(1) Schedule 9 shall have effect with respect to the application of this Act in relation to members of the reserve forces who are members of —
(a) the original transitional class (see Parts 1 and 2 of that Schedule), or
(b) the second transitional class (see Parts 3 and 4 of that Schedule).
(2) Nothing in the Reserve Forces Act 1980 shall apply to a member of a reserve force who is not a member of the original transitional class or, in the case of a person who is to be transferred to the reserve from the regular services, is not capable of becoming a member of the original transitional class.
(3) In this Act— “the original transitional class”, in relation to members of the reserve forces, shall be construed in accordance with Part I of Schedule 9;
“the second transitional class”, in relation to members of the reserve forces, shall be construed in accordance with Part 3 of Schedule 9.
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129 Application of Act to members of transitional classes.
(1) Schedule 9 shall have effect with respect to the application of this Act in relation to members of the reserve forces who are members of —
(a) the original transitional class (see Parts 1 and 2 of that Schedule), or
(b) the second transitional class (see Parts 3 and 4 of that Schedule).
(2) Nothing in the Reserve Forces Act 1980 shall apply to a member of a reserve force who is not a member of the original transitional class or, in the case of a person who is to be transferred to the reserve from the regular services, is not capable of becoming a member of the original transitional class.
(3) In this Act— “the original transitional class”, in relation to members of the reserve forces, shall be construed in accordance with Part I of Schedule 9;
“the second transitional class”, in relation to members of the reserve forces, shall be construed in accordance with Part 3 of Schedule 9.
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