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As published
22 Training obligations of members of the reserve forces.
(1) A member of a reserve force may, in accordance with orders or regulations under section 4, be required by virtue of this section, in any year, to train in the United Kingdom or elsewhere for—
(a) one or more periods not exceeding 16 days in aggregate; and
(b) such other periods as may be prescribed, none of which shall exceed 36 hours without the consent of the person concerned;
and such a person may, while undergoing a period of training under this section, be attached to and trained with any body of Her Majesty’s forces.
(2) Such orders or regulations may, in particular, prescribe different periods under subsection (1)(b) for different forces or parts of a force.
(3) This section has effect subject to section 23.
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22 Training obligations of members of the reserve forces.
(1) A member of a reserve force may, in accordance with orders or regulations under section 4, be required by virtue of this section, in any year, to train in the United Kingdom or elsewhere for—
(a) one or more periods not exceeding 16 days in aggregate; and
(b) such other periods as may be prescribed, none of which shall exceed 36 hours without the consent of the person concerned;
and such a person may, while undergoing a period of training under this section, be attached to and trained with any body of Her Majesty’s forces.
(2) Such orders or regulations may, in particular, prescribe different periods under subsection (1)(b) for different forces or parts of a force.
(3) This section has effect subject to section 23.
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