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As published
21-I:11-a Fund Restrictions; Cash Reserves Prorated.
I. Expenditures from the fund established by RSA 21-I:11, I(a)(6)(B), shall be restricted to defraying the following costs of the respective programs incurred as a result of transferring donated commodities or surpluses from the consignee point of delivery or point of origin to the ultimate point of consumption:
(a) Compensation and travel expenses of individuals directly connected with the distribution of donated commodities.
(b) Supplies, equipment, warehousing and storage costs.
(c) Labor and transportation costs.
(d) Such other related costs as may be required to effect orderly distribution of commodities.
II. If the program of distribution of donated commodities and surpluses carried out by the surplus distribution section is discontinued due to failure to receive surpluses for distribution, the cash reserves shall be prorated back to the recipients who contributed to such reserves during the previous 3 years.
Source. 1985, 188:5, eff. May 28, 1985. 2014, 327:7, eff. Aug. 2, 2014. 2019, 346:39, eff. July 1, 2019.
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21-I:11-a Fund Restrictions; Cash Reserves Prorated.
I. Expenditures from the fund established by RSA 21-I:11, I(a)(6)(B), shall be restricted to defraying the following costs of the respective programs incurred as a result of transferring donated commodities or surpluses from the consignee point of delivery or point of origin to the ultimate point of consumption:
(a) Compensation and travel expenses of individuals directly connected with the distribution of donated commodities.
(b) Supplies, equipment, warehousing and storage costs.
(c) Labor and transportation costs.
(d) Such other related costs as may be required to effect orderly distribution of commodities.
II. If the program of distribution of donated commodities and surpluses carried out by the surplus distribution section is discontinued due to failure to receive surpluses for distribution, the cash reserves shall be prorated back to the recipients who contributed to such reserves during the previous 3 years.
Source. 1985, 188:5, eff. May 28, 1985. 2014, 327:7, eff. Aug. 2, 2014. 2019, 346:39, eff. July 1, 2019.
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