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52A Regulations about hours, leave or pay: consultation etc
(1) This section applies where the Secretary of State is proposing to make regulations under section 50 or 52 on a matter that relates to—
(a) hours of duty,
(b) leave,
(c) pay and allowances, or
(d) the issue, use and return of police clothing, personal equipment and accoutrements.
(2) In the case of regulations under section 50 concerning members of police forces of or below the rank of chief superintendent, or regulations under section 52, before making the regulations the Secretary of State shall (subject to subsection (5))—
(a) refer the matter to the Police Remuneration Review Body under section 64B(1), and
(b) consider that body's report on the matter.
(3) In the case of regulations under section 50 concerning members of police forces above the rank of chief superintendent, before making the regulations the Secretary of State shall (subject to subsection (5))—
(a) consider advice on the matter from the Senior Salaries Review Body, or
(b) where subsection (4) applies, refer the matter to the Police Remuneration Review Body under section 64B(1) and consider that body's report on the matter.
(4) This subsection applies where—
(a) the regulations would affect members of police forces who are not above the rank of chief superintendent as well as those who are, and
(b) the Secretary of State thinks that it would be preferable for the matter to be considered by the same body.
(5) The duty to consider advice from the Senior Salaries Review Body or to refer the matter to the Police Remuneration Review Body does not apply if the Secretary of State considers that—
(a) there is not enough time to do so because the need to make the regulations is so urgent, or
(b) it is unnecessary to do so by reason of the nature of the proposed regulations.
(6) In all cases, before making the regulations the Secretary of State shall supply a draft of them to, and consider any representations made by, persons whom the Secretary of State considers to represent the interests of—
(a) the persons and bodies who between them maintain police forces;
(b) chief officers of police;
(c) members of police forces;
(d) police cadets appointed under section 28.
(7) The Secretary of State may by order amend this section in consequence of a change in the name or functions of the body for the time being specified in subsection (3)(a).
(8) A statutory instrument containing an order under subsection (7) shall be subject to annulment in pursuance of a resolution of either House of Parliament.
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52A Regulations about hours, leave or pay: consultation etc
(1) This section applies where the Secretary of State is proposing to make regulations under section 50 or 52 on a matter that relates to—
(a) hours of duty,
(b) leave,
(c) pay and allowances, or
(d) the issue, use and return of police clothing, personal equipment and accoutrements.
(2) In the case of regulations under section 50 concerning members of police forces of or below the rank of chief superintendent, or regulations under section 52, before making the regulations the Secretary of State shall (subject to subsection (5))—
(a) refer the matter to the Police Remuneration Review Body under section 64B(1), and
(b) consider that body's report on the matter.
(3) In the case of regulations under section 50 concerning members of police forces above the rank of chief superintendent, before making the regulations the Secretary of State shall (subject to subsection (5))—
(a) consider advice on the matter from the Senior Salaries Review Body, or
(b) where subsection (4) applies, refer the matter to the Police Remuneration Review Body under section 64B(1) and consider that body's report on the matter.
(4) This subsection applies where—
(a) the regulations would affect members of police forces who are not above the rank of chief superintendent as well as those who are, and
(b) the Secretary of State thinks that it would be preferable for the matter to be considered by the same body.
(5) The duty to consider advice from the Senior Salaries Review Body or to refer the matter to the Police Remuneration Review Body does not apply if the Secretary of State considers that—
(a) there is not enough time to do so because the need to make the regulations is so urgent, or
(b) it is unnecessary to do so by reason of the nature of the proposed regulations.
(6) In all cases, before making the regulations the Secretary of State shall supply a draft of them to, and consider any representations made by, persons whom the Secretary of State considers to represent the interests of—
(a) the persons and bodies who between them maintain police forces;
(b) chief officers of police;
(c) members of police forces;
(d) police cadets appointed under section 28.
(7) The Secretary of State may by order amend this section in consequence of a change in the name or functions of the body for the time being specified in subsection (3)(a).
(8) A statutory instrument containing an order under subsection (7) shall be subject to annulment in pursuance of a resolution of either House of Parliament.
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