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2 Exception for premises in which only employer’s relatives or outworkers work.
(1) This Act shall not apply to any premises to which it would, apart from this subsection, apply, if none of the persons employed to work in the premises is other than the husband, wife , civil partner, parent, grandparent, son, daughter, grandchild, brother or sister of the person by whom they are so employed.
(2) A dwelling shall not, for the purposes of this Act, be taken to constitute or comprise premises to which this Act applies by reason only that a person dwelling there who is employed by a person who does not so dwell does there the work that he is employed to do in compliance with a term of his contract of service that he shall do it there.
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2 Exception for premises in which only employer’s relatives or outworkers work.
(1) This Act shall not apply to any premises to which it would, apart from this subsection, apply, if none of the persons employed to work in the premises is other than the husband, wife , civil partner, parent, grandparent, son, daughter, grandchild, brother or sister of the person by whom they are so employed.
(2) A dwelling shall not, for the purposes of this Act, be taken to constitute or comprise premises to which this Act applies by reason only that a person dwelling there who is employed by a person who does not so dwell does there the work that he is employed to do in compliance with a term of his contract of service that he shall do it there.
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