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29A Power to make super-complaints
(1) A designated body may make a complaint to Her Majesty's Chief Inspector of Constabulary that a feature, or combination of features, of policing in England and Wales by one or more than one police force is, or appears to be, significantly harming the interests of the public.
(2) See section 29B for the meaning of “designated body”.
(3) In this section-
“England and Wales” includes the adjacent United Kingdom waters within the meaning of section 30 of the Police Act 1996,
“police force” means any of the following—
the metropolitan police force,
a police force maintained under section 2 of the Police Act 1996 (police forces in England and Wales outside London),
the National Crime Agency,
the City of London police force,
the Ministry of Defence Police,
the Civil Nuclear Constabulary,
the British Transport Police.
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29A Power to make super-complaints
(1) A designated body may make a complaint to Her Majesty's Chief Inspector of Constabulary that a feature, or combination of features, of policing in England and Wales by one or more than one police force is, or appears to be, significantly harming the interests of the public.
(2) See section 29B for the meaning of “designated body”.
(3) In this section-
“England and Wales” includes the adjacent United Kingdom waters within the meaning of section 30 of the Police Act 1996,
“police force” means any of the following—
the metropolitan police force,
a police force maintained under section 2 of the Police Act 1996 (police forces in England and Wales outside London),
the National Crime Agency,
the City of London police force,
the Ministry of Defence Police,
the Civil Nuclear Constabulary,
the British Transport Police.
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