Write the words of this act the way you think they should read. Solon shows your change as a redline against the published text and pins it to that exact text, so it can never be applied to wording you did not see.
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As published
§ 33. Lastivaht
Laevaohvitserid, kes vastutavad lastitoimingute kavandamise ja läbiviimise eest, on kohustatud tagama nimetatud toimingute ohutu läbiviimise taoliste toimingutega kaasnevate eririskide kontrollimise abil, seda ka isikute puhul, kes ei kuulu laevapersonali hulka.
Your change, as a redline
§ 33. Lastivaht
Laevaohvitserid, kes vastutavad lastitoimingute kavandamise ja läbiviimise eest, on kohustatud tagama nimetatud toimingute ohutu läbiviimise taoliste toimingutega kaasnevate eririskide kontrollimise abil, seda ka isikute puhul, kes ei kuulu laevapersonali hulka.
One line that says what changes, such as "Halve the dog tax".
Who it helps, what it costs, what it fixes. It is what persuades people to support it.
A proposal here is not law. Support on Solon is evidence that people want the change; the official route says what it takes to make it law.
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