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As published
89 Remote operating licence
(1) This section applies to a remote operating licence.
(2) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
(3) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
(4) The Commission may establish, or provide for the establishment of, standards in respect of—
(a) a system used for the generation of results in a virtual game, virtual race or other virtual event or process used in the course of remote gambling;
(b) any other aspect of the process of remote gambling.
(5) In particular, the Commission may—
(a) provide for the enforcement of standards by the attachment of conditions under section 75 or 77;
(b) make arrangements with any person for the establishment of standards;
(c) make arrangements with any person for the administration of tests of compliance with standards;
(d) for the purpose of considering whether a condition under section section 75 or 77 has been complied with, require the licensee under a remote licence—
(i) to submit to a test in accordance with arrangements made under paragraph (c) above, and
(ii) to produce specified evidence of the result of the test;
(e) for the purpose of considering whether to grant an application under this Part, require a licensee under a remote licence or an applicant for a remote licence—
(i) to submit to a test in accordance with arrangements made under paragraph (c) above, and
(ii) to produce specified evidence of the result of the test.
(6) Standards established under subsection (5) may, in particular, be expressed—
(a) by reference to the opinion of a specified person or class of persons;
(b) by reference to a specified process or piece of equipment.
(7) This section is without prejudice to the generality of sections 75, 77 and 78.
Your change, as a redline
89 Remote operating licence
(1) This section applies to a remote operating licence.
(2) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
(3) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
(4) The Commission may establish, or provide for the establishment of, standards in respect of—
(a) a system used for the generation of results in a virtual game, virtual race or other virtual event or process used in the course of remote gambling;
(b) any other aspect of the process of remote gambling.
(5) In particular, the Commission may—
(a) provide for the enforcement of standards by the attachment of conditions under section 75 or 77;
(b) make arrangements with any person for the establishment of standards;
(c) make arrangements with any person for the administration of tests of compliance with standards;
(d) for the purpose of considering whether a condition under section section 75 or 77 has been complied with, require the licensee under a remote licence—
(i) to submit to a test in accordance with arrangements made under paragraph (c) above, and
(ii) to produce specified evidence of the result of the test;
(e) for the purpose of considering whether to grant an application under this Part, require a licensee under a remote licence or an applicant for a remote licence—
(i) to submit to a test in accordance with arrangements made under paragraph (c) above, and
(ii) to produce specified evidence of the result of the test.
(6) Standards established under subsection (5) may, in particular, be expressed—
(a) by reference to the opinion of a specified person or class of persons;
(b) by reference to a specified process or piece of equipment.
(7) This section is without prejudice to the generality of sections 75, 77 and 78.
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