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63D Terrorist attacks or threats abroad in connection with UK diplomatic premises etc: jurisdiction
(1) If—
(a) a person does anything outside the United Kingdom as an act of terrorism or for the purposes of terrorism,
(b) his action is done in connection with an attack on relevant premises or on a vehicle ordinarily used by a protected person,
(c) the attack is made when a protected person is on or in the premises or vehicle, and
(d) his action, if done in any part of the United Kingdom, would have constituted an offence listed in subsection (2),
he shall be guilty in that part of the United Kingdom of the offence.
(2) These are the offences—
(a) an offence under section 1 of the Criminal Damage Act 1971,
(b) an offence under Article 3 of the Criminal Damage (Northern Ireland) Order 1977,
(c) malicious mischief,
(d) wilful fire-raising.
(3) If—
(a) a person does anything outside the United Kingdom as an act of terrorism or for the purposes of terrorism,
(b) his action consists of a threat of an attack on relevant premises or on a vehicle ordinarily used by a protected person,
(c) the attack is threatened to be made when a protected person is, or is likely to be, on or in the premises or vehicle, and
(d) his action, if done in any part of the United Kingdom, would have constituted an offence listed in subsection (4),
he shall be guilty in that part of the United Kingdom of the offence.
(4) These are the offences—
(a) an offence under section 2 of the Criminal Damage Act 1971,
(b) an offence under Article 4 of the Criminal Damage (Northern Ireland) Order 1977,
(c) breach of the peace (in relation to Scotland only).
(5) “ Relevant premises ” means—
(a) premises at which a protected person resides or is staying, or
(b) premises which a protected person uses for the purpose of carrying out his functions as such a person.
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63D Terrorist attacks or threats abroad in connection with UK diplomatic premises etc: jurisdiction
(1) If—
(a) a person does anything outside the United Kingdom as an act of terrorism or for the purposes of terrorism,
(b) his action is done in connection with an attack on relevant premises or on a vehicle ordinarily used by a protected person,
(c) the attack is made when a protected person is on or in the premises or vehicle, and
(d) his action, if done in any part of the United Kingdom, would have constituted an offence listed in subsection (2),
he shall be guilty in that part of the United Kingdom of the offence.
(2) These are the offences—
(a) an offence under section 1 of the Criminal Damage Act 1971,
(b) an offence under Article 3 of the Criminal Damage (Northern Ireland) Order 1977,
(c) malicious mischief,
(d) wilful fire-raising.
(3) If—
(a) a person does anything outside the United Kingdom as an act of terrorism or for the purposes of terrorism,
(b) his action consists of a threat of an attack on relevant premises or on a vehicle ordinarily used by a protected person,
(c) the attack is threatened to be made when a protected person is, or is likely to be, on or in the premises or vehicle, and
(d) his action, if done in any part of the United Kingdom, would have constituted an offence listed in subsection (4),
he shall be guilty in that part of the United Kingdom of the offence.
(4) These are the offences—
(a) an offence under section 2 of the Criminal Damage Act 1971,
(b) an offence under Article 4 of the Criminal Damage (Northern Ireland) Order 1977,
(c) breach of the peace (in relation to Scotland only).
(5) “ Relevant premises ” means—
(a) premises at which a protected person resides or is staying, or
(b) premises which a protected person uses for the purpose of carrying out his functions as such a person.
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