Write the words of this act the way you think they should read. Solon shows your change as a redline against the published text and pins it to that exact text, so it can never be applied to wording you did not see.
Change 1
As published
103 Power to modify Part VI in relation to particular friendly societies.
(1) The appropriate authority may, on the application or with the consent of a friendly society, . . . direct that all or any of the provisions of Part . . . VI of this Act , or any provision of regulations made for the purposes of that Part, shall not apply to the society or shall apply to it with such modifications as may be specified in the direction.
(2) A direction under this section may be subject to conditions.
(3) A direction under this section may be revoked by the appropriate authority at any time; and the appropriate authority, may at any time vary any such direction on the application or with the consent of the society to which it applies.
(3A) The PRA must consult the FCA before making, varying or revoking a direction under this section.
(3B) The PRA must send the FCA a copy of any direction, variation or revocation under this section.
(4) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
(5) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
(6) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
(7) The FCA must keep in a register kept by it for the purposes of this subsection a copy of any direction, variation or revocation under this section.
(8) The register kept for the purposes of subsection (7) above shall be available for inspection on reasonable notice by members of the public.
(9) The FCA shall keep a copy of—
(a) any direction ... under this section, and
(b) any revocation or variation of any such direction,
and the central office shall keep the copy in the public file of the society to which it relates.
Your change, as a redline
103 Power to modify Part VI in relation to particular friendly societies.
(1) The appropriate authority may, on the application or with the consent of a friendly society, . . . direct that all or any of the provisions of Part . . . VI of this Act , or any provision of regulations made for the purposes of that Part, shall not apply to the society or shall apply to it with such modifications as may be specified in the direction.
(2) A direction under this section may be subject to conditions.
(3) A direction under this section may be revoked by the appropriate authority at any time; and the appropriate authority, may at any time vary any such direction on the application or with the consent of the society to which it applies.
(3A) The PRA must consult the FCA before making, varying or revoking a direction under this section.
(3B) The PRA must send the FCA a copy of any direction, variation or revocation under this section.
(4) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
(5) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
(6) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
(7) The FCA must keep in a register kept by it for the purposes of this subsection a copy of any direction, variation or revocation under this section.
(8) The register kept for the purposes of subsection (7) above shall be available for inspection on reasonable notice by members of the public.
(9) The FCA shall keep a copy of—
(a) any direction ... under this section, and
(b) any revocation or variation of any such direction,
and the central office shall keep the copy in the public file of the society to which it relates.
One line that says what changes, such as "Halve the dog tax".
Who it helps, what it costs, what it fixes. It is what persuades people to support it.
A proposal here is not law. Support on Solon is evidence that people want the change; the official route says what it takes to make it law.
Sign in to file your proposal. What you have written stays on this page.
Ask what your change would do, who would gain and who would bear a cost, and where something like it is already law. The assistant reads your draft as it stands, cites the law and the studies it finds, and takes no side. What you file stays yours.