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As published
112 Records of friendly societies.
(1) Subject to any other provision of this Act or regulations under it, any record to be kept by a friendly society may be kept in any manner.
(2) Where any such record is not kept by making entries in a bound book, but by some other means, adequate precautions shall be taken for guarding against falsification and facilitating its discovery.
(3) The power in subsection (1) above includes power to keep the record by recording matters otherwise than in legible form so long as the recording is capable of being reproduced in a legible form; and any duty imposed by or under this Act to allow inspection of, or to furnish a copy of, the record or any part of it is to be treated as a duty to allow inspection of, or to furnish, a reproduction of the recording or of the relevant part of it in a legible form.
(4) The Treasury may by regulations, make such provision in addition to subsection (3) above as they consider appropriate in connection with such records as are kept otherwise than in legible form; and the regulations may make modifications of this Act so far as it relates to the records of friendly societies.
(5) If default is made in complying with this section the society shall be guilty of an offence and liable on summary conviction—
(a) to a fine not exceeding level 4 on the standard scale; and
(b) in the case of a continuing offence, to an additional fine not exceeding one-tenth of that level for every day during which the offence continues.
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112 Records of friendly societies.
(1) Subject to any other provision of this Act or regulations under it, any record to be kept by a friendly society may be kept in any manner.
(2) Where any such record is not kept by making entries in a bound book, but by some other means, adequate precautions shall be taken for guarding against falsification and facilitating its discovery.
(3) The power in subsection (1) above includes power to keep the record by recording matters otherwise than in legible form so long as the recording is capable of being reproduced in a legible form; and any duty imposed by or under this Act to allow inspection of, or to furnish a copy of, the record or any part of it is to be treated as a duty to allow inspection of, or to furnish, a reproduction of the recording or of the relevant part of it in a legible form.
(4) The Treasury may by regulations, make such provision in addition to subsection (3) above as they consider appropriate in connection with such records as are kept otherwise than in legible form; and the regulations may make modifications of this Act so far as it relates to the records of friendly societies.
(5) If default is made in complying with this section the society shall be guilty of an offence and liable on summary conviction—
(a) to a fine not exceeding level 4 on the standard scale; and
(b) in the case of a continuing offence, to an additional fine not exceeding one-tenth of that level for every day during which the offence continues.
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