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20 Review of felling directions.
(1) If a person to whom felling directions are given in respect of any trees is aggrieved by the directions on the ground that the felling is not expedient as mentioned in section 18(1), he may by notice served within the prescribed time and in the prescribed manner request the Minister where the felling direction was given in respect of trees in England or Wales ... to refer the matter to a committee appointed in accordance with section 27 below and the Minister ... shall, unless he is ... of opinion that the grounds for the request are frivolous, refer the matter accordingly.
(2) The committee to whom a matter is referred under this section, after complying with section 27(3), shall thereupon make a report on the reference to the person by whom the notice was served and to the appropriate forestry authority, and the appropriate forestry authority shall confirm, withdraw or modify the directions in accordance with the report.
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20 Review of felling directions.
(1) If a person to whom felling directions are given in respect of any trees is aggrieved by the directions on the ground that the felling is not expedient as mentioned in section 18(1), he may by notice served within the prescribed time and in the prescribed manner request the Minister where the felling direction was given in respect of trees in England or Wales ... to refer the matter to a committee appointed in accordance with section 27 below and the Minister ... shall, unless he is ... of opinion that the grounds for the request are frivolous, refer the matter accordingly.
(2) The committee to whom a matter is referred under this section, after complying with section 27(3), shall thereupon make a report on the reference to the person by whom the notice was served and to the appropriate forestry authority, and the appropriate forestry authority shall confirm, withdraw or modify the directions in accordance with the report.
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