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As published
24A Further notice under section 24 for next estate or interest holders
(1) Subsection (2) applies where—
(a) a notice has been given to a person under section 24 to require compliance with the conditions of a felling licence in relation to land in England,
(b) steps required by the notice have not been taken, and
(c) before the time specified in the notice has expired, the person ceases to have the estate or interest in the land by reference to which the notice was served.
(2) The Commissioners may give to the next estate or interest holder a further notice under section 24 requiring the steps that were not completed under the notice described in subsection (1) to be completed.
(3) In subsection (2) the “next estate or interest holder” means the person who has an estate or interest in the land as is referred to in section 10(1) immediately after the person referred to in subsection (1) ceased to have the estate or interest referred to in subsection (1)(c).
(4) The reference in subsection (1) to a notice under section 24 includes a notice given under subsection (2).
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24A Further notice under section 24 for next estate or interest holders
(1) Subsection (2) applies where—
(a) a notice has been given to a person under section 24 to require compliance with the conditions of a felling licence in relation to land in England,
(b) steps required by the notice have not been taken, and
(c) before the time specified in the notice has expired, the person ceases to have the estate or interest in the land by reference to which the notice was served.
(2) The Commissioners may give to the next estate or interest holder a further notice under section 24 requiring the steps that were not completed under the notice described in subsection (1) to be completed.
(3) In subsection (2) the “next estate or interest holder” means the person who has an estate or interest in the land as is referred to in section 10(1) immediately after the person referred to in subsection (1) ceased to have the estate or interest referred to in subsection (1)(c).
(4) The reference in subsection (1) to a notice under section 24 includes a notice given under subsection (2).
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