Write the words of this act the way you think they should read. Solon shows your change as a redline against the published text and pins it to that exact text, so it can never be applied to wording you did not see.
Change 1
As published
46 Accommodation and welfare of disabled and old persons, etc.
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(4) The functions of the council of a London borough under section 47 of the said Act of 1948 (which relates to the removal to suitable premises of persons in need of care and attention) . . . shall, as respects the Inner Temple and the Middle Temple, be exercisable by the Sub-Treasurer and the Under-Treasurer thereof respectively, and those persons shall be included among the appropriate authorities specified in sections 47 (12) . . . of that Act.
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Your change, as a redline
46 Accommodation and welfare of disabled and old persons, etc.
(1),(2) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
(3) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
(4) The functions of the council of a London borough under section 47 of the said Act of 1948 (which relates to the removal to suitable premises of persons in need of care and attention) . . . shall, as respects the Inner Temple and the Middle Temple, be exercisable by the Sub-Treasurer and the Under-Treasurer thereof respectively, and those persons shall be included among the appropriate authorities specified in sections 47 (12) . . . of that Act.
(5)—(8) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
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