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As published
94 Short title, commencement and extent.
(1) This Act may be cited as the London Government Act 1963.
(2) The following provisions of this Act shall not come into force until 1st April 1965, that is to say, Parts II, III, and V to VIII other than sections 17(6), 48(2), 62(4), 66, 69, and 70.
(3) Except for section 4(4) . . . of this Act . . . , the provisions of this Act other than this subsection shall not extend to Scotland; and as from 1st April 1965 in paragraph 8 of Schedule 6 to the Valuation and Rating (Scotland) Act 1956 for the words “the Administrative County of London” there shall be substituted the words “Greater London other than the outer London boroughs”.
(4) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . , the provisions of this Act. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . shall not extend to Northern Ireland.
Your change, as a redline
94 Short title, commencement and extent.
(1) This Act may be cited as the London Government Act 1963.
(2) The following provisions of this Act shall not come into force until 1st April 1965, that is to say, Parts II, III, and V to VIII other than sections 17(6), 48(2), 62(4), 66, 69, and 70.
(3) Except for section 4(4) . . . of this Act . . . , the provisions of this Act other than this subsection shall not extend to Scotland; and as from 1st April 1965 in paragraph 8 of Schedule 6 to the Valuation and Rating (Scotland) Act 1956 for the words “the Administrative County of London” there shall be substituted the words “Greater London other than the outer London boroughs”.
(4) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . , the provisions of this Act. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . shall not extend to Northern Ireland.
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