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As published
§ 25. Vägivalda õhutava ja pornograafilise sisuga esemete levitamise keeld
(1) Julmust ja vägivalda õhutavate trükiste, filmide, heli- ja videosalvestiste ning esemete tootmine, demonstreerimine ja levitamine lastele on keelatud.
(2) Pornograafilise sisuga esemete, trükiste ja filmide tootmine, demonstreerimine ja levitamine lastele on keelatud.
Your change, as a redline
§ 25. Vägivalda õhutava ja pornograafilise sisuga esemete levitamise keeld
(1) Julmust ja vägivalda õhutavate trükiste, filmide, heli- ja videosalvestiste ning esemete tootmine, demonstreerimine ja levitamine lastele on keelatud.
(2) Pornograafilise sisuga esemete, trükiste ja filmide tootmine, demonstreerimine ja levitamine lastele on keelatud.
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