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As published
14A Landlord improvement notices
(1) This section applies where the landlord of an agricultural holding intends to carry out a relevant improvement.
(2) A “relevant improvement” is an improvement specified in schedule 5 which is not intended to be carried out—
(a) at the request of or in agreement with the tenant,
(b) in pursuance of an undertaking given by landlord under section 39(3), or
(c) in pursuance of a direction given by the Scottish Ministers under powers conferred on them by or under any enactment.
(3) The landlord must give notice in writing to the tenant before carrying out the relevant improvement, unless section 14F applies.
(4) A notice served in accordance with this section is a “landlord improvement notice”.
(5) A landlord improvement notice must be dated and state the following—
(a) the names and designations of the landlord and the tenant,
(b) the name (if any) and the address of the holding or such other description of the holding as will identify it,
(c) details of the intended improvement, including the manner of the improvement,
(d) the landlord's reasons as to why the improvement is necessary to enable the tenant to fulfil the tenant's responsibilities to farm the holding in accordance with the rules of good husbandry.
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14A Landlord improvement notices
(1) This section applies where the landlord of an agricultural holding intends to carry out a relevant improvement.
(2) A “relevant improvement” is an improvement specified in schedule 5 which is not intended to be carried out—
(a) at the request of or in agreement with the tenant,
(b) in pursuance of an undertaking given by landlord under section 39(3), or
(c) in pursuance of a direction given by the Scottish Ministers under powers conferred on them by or under any enactment.
(3) The landlord must give notice in writing to the tenant before carrying out the relevant improvement, unless section 14F applies.
(4) A notice served in accordance with this section is a “landlord improvement notice”.
(5) A landlord improvement notice must be dated and state the following—
(a) the names and designations of the landlord and the tenant,
(b) the name (if any) and the address of the holding or such other description of the holding as will identify it,
(c) details of the intended improvement, including the manner of the improvement,
(d) the landlord's reasons as to why the improvement is necessary to enable the tenant to fulfil the tenant's responsibilities to farm the holding in accordance with the rules of good husbandry.
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