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32D Form and content of notice of intention to relinquish
(1) The Scottish Ministers may by regulations prescribe the form and content of notices of intention to relinquish.
(2) Regulations under subsection (1) may, in particular, include provision for—
(a) such notices to be dated,
(b) such notices to state—
(i) the names and designations of the landlord and the tenant of the agricultural holding,
(ii) the name (if any) and the address of the holding or such other description of the holding as will identify it,
(iii) the rent currently payable in respect of the holding,
(iv) the date on which the rent for the holding was last varied or, as the case may be, continued unchanged (whether by agreement or by determination of the Land Court),
(v) the improvements (if any) carried out to the holding by the tenant,
(c) the information that must or may accompany such notices (which may include maps or plans of the holding).
(3) Regulations under subsection (1) are subject to the negative procedure.
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32D Form and content of notice of intention to relinquish
(1) The Scottish Ministers may by regulations prescribe the form and content of notices of intention to relinquish.
(2) Regulations under subsection (1) may, in particular, include provision for—
(a) such notices to be dated,
(b) such notices to state—
(i) the names and designations of the landlord and the tenant of the agricultural holding,
(ii) the name (if any) and the address of the holding or such other description of the holding as will identify it,
(iii) the rent currently payable in respect of the holding,
(iv) the date on which the rent for the holding was last varied or, as the case may be, continued unchanged (whether by agreement or by determination of the Land Court),
(v) the improvements (if any) carried out to the holding by the tenant,
(c) the information that must or may accompany such notices (which may include maps or plans of the holding).
(3) Regulations under subsection (1) are subject to the negative procedure.
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