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130 Meaning of “medicinal product" and related expressions.
(1) In this Act, “medicinal product” has the meaning given by regulation 2 of the 2012 Regulations.
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(9) In this Act “ administer ” means administer to a human being ..., whether orally, by injection or by introduction into the body in any other way, or by external application, whether by direct contact with the body or not; and any reference in this Act to administering (...) a substance or article is a reference to administering (...) it either in its existing state or after it has been dissolved or dispersed in, or diluted or mixed with, some other substance used as a vehicle.
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Your change, as a redline
130 Meaning of “medicinal product" and related expressions.
(1) In this Act, “medicinal product” has the meaning given by regulation 2 of the 2012 Regulations.
(2) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
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(9) In this Act “ administer ” means administer to a human being ..., whether orally, by injection or by introduction into the body in any other way, or by external application, whether by direct contact with the body or not; and any reference in this Act to administering (...) a substance or article is a reference to administering (...) it either in its existing state or after it has been dissolved or dispersed in, or diluted or mixed with, some other substance used as a vehicle.
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