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As published
74F Giving of notice by registrar: Great Britain
(1) Where, in pursuance of an application, the registrar enters premises in Part 3 of the register under section 74A, the registrar must give to the applicant a written confirmation of the entry.
(2) The written confirmation under subsection (1) must include—
(a) the number of the entry;
(b) the date on which the entry was made;
(c) the period for which the entry is valid; and
(d) details of any conditions to which the entry is subject by virtue of section 74D.
(3) Where, in pursuance of an application, the registrar renews the entry of premises in Part 3 of the register under section 74A, the registrar must give to the applicant a written confirmation of the renewal.
(4) The written confirmation under subsection (3) must include—
(a) the number of the entry;
(b) the date on which the renewal of the entry was made;
(c) the period for which the renewal of the entry is valid; and
(d) details of any conditions to which the renewal of the entry is subject by virtue of section 74D.
(5) Where the registrar refuses an application for the entry of premises in Part 3 of the register under section 74A, or for the renewal of an entry of premises in the register under that section, the registrar must give to the applicant written notice of that refusal and the reasons for it and of the right of appeal to the Appeals Committee under article 40 of the Pharmacy Order 2010.
(6) Where, under section 74J, the registrar enters premises or a group of premises in Part 3 of the register, the registrar must give written confirmation of the entry to the person who will be carrying on a retail pharmacy business at or from the premises, or at or from each set of premises in the group of premises.
(7) The written confirmation under subsection (6) must include—
(a) the number of the entry;
(b) the date on which the entry was made; and
(c) details of any conditions to which the entry is subject by virtue of section 74J(4).
Your change, as a redline
74F Giving of notice by registrar: Great Britain
(1) Where, in pursuance of an application, the registrar enters premises in Part 3 of the register under section 74A, the registrar must give to the applicant a written confirmation of the entry.
(2) The written confirmation under subsection (1) must include—
(a) the number of the entry;
(b) the date on which the entry was made;
(c) the period for which the entry is valid; and
(d) details of any conditions to which the entry is subject by virtue of section 74D.
(3) Where, in pursuance of an application, the registrar renews the entry of premises in Part 3 of the register under section 74A, the registrar must give to the applicant a written confirmation of the renewal.
(4) The written confirmation under subsection (3) must include—
(a) the number of the entry;
(b) the date on which the renewal of the entry was made;
(c) the period for which the renewal of the entry is valid; and
(d) details of any conditions to which the renewal of the entry is subject by virtue of section 74D.
(5) Where the registrar refuses an application for the entry of premises in Part 3 of the register under section 74A, or for the renewal of an entry of premises in the register under that section, the registrar must give to the applicant written notice of that refusal and the reasons for it and of the right of appeal to the Appeals Committee under article 40 of the Pharmacy Order 2010.
(6) Where, under section 74J, the registrar enters premises or a group of premises in Part 3 of the register, the registrar must give written confirmation of the entry to the person who will be carrying on a retail pharmacy business at or from the premises, or at or from each set of premises in the group of premises.
(7) The written confirmation under subsection (6) must include—
(a) the number of the entry;
(b) the date on which the entry was made; and
(c) details of any conditions to which the entry is subject by virtue of section 74J(4).
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