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215 Commencement and transitional provisions.
(1) The following provisions of this Act come into force on Royal Assent—
(a) in Part V (amendments of company law), section 141 (application to declare dissolution of company void);
(b) in Part VI (mergers)—
(i) sections 147 to 150, and
(ii) paragraphs 2 to 12, 14 to 16, 18 to 20, 22 to 25 of Schedule 20, and section 153 so far as relating to those paragraphs;
(c) in Part VIII (amendments of the Financial Services Act 1986), section 202 (offers of short-dated debentures);
(d) in Part X (miscellaneous and general provisions), the repeals made by Schedule 24 in sections 71, 74, 88 and 89 of, and Schedule 9 to, the Fair Trading Act 1973, and section 212 so far as relating to those repeals.
(2) The other provisions of this Act come into force on such day as the Secretary of State may appoint by order made by statutory instrument; and different days may be appointed for different provisions and different purposes.
(3) An order bringing into force any provision may contain such transitional provisions and savings as appear to the Secretary of State to be necessary or expedient.
(4) The Secretary of State may also by order under this section amend any enactment which refers to the commencement of a provision brought into force by the order so as to substitute a reference to the actual date on which it comes into force.
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215 Commencement and transitional provisions.
(1) The following provisions of this Act come into force on Royal Assent—
(a) in Part V (amendments of company law), section 141 (application to declare dissolution of company void);
(b) in Part VI (mergers)—
(i) sections 147 to 150, and
(ii) paragraphs 2 to 12, 14 to 16, 18 to 20, 22 to 25 of Schedule 20, and section 153 so far as relating to those paragraphs;
(c) in Part VIII (amendments of the Financial Services Act 1986), section 202 (offers of short-dated debentures);
(d) in Part X (miscellaneous and general provisions), the repeals made by Schedule 24 in sections 71, 74, 88 and 89 of, and Schedule 9 to, the Fair Trading Act 1973, and section 212 so far as relating to those repeals.
(2) The other provisions of this Act come into force on such day as the Secretary of State may appoint by order made by statutory instrument; and different days may be appointed for different provisions and different purposes.
(3) An order bringing into force any provision may contain such transitional provisions and savings as appear to the Secretary of State to be necessary or expedient.
(4) The Secretary of State may also by order under this section amend any enactment which refers to the commencement of a provision brought into force by the order so as to substitute a reference to the actual date on which it comes into force.
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