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8 Pool participants in the Trading Schemes: general
(1) Each manufacturer which is a member of a pool participant in the Trading Schemes is jointly and severally liable—
(a) to comply with requirements placed on the pool participant in the Trading Schemes by or under this Order; and
(b) in respect of a financial civil penalty imposed on the pool participant in the Trading Schemes under Part 6.
(2) Paragraph (3) applies to any reference in this Order to a participant in the Trading Schemes being the manufacturer of a car, a van, a base vehicle or an SPV, where that participant is a pool participant in the Trading Schemes.
(3) A reference to which this paragraph applies is to be read as a reference to the pool participant in the Trading Schemes being the manufacturer of a car, a van, a base vehicle or an SPV, as the case may be, of which a member of the group of manufacturers making up the pool participant in the Trading Schemes is the manufacturer.
(4) Any obligation on the administrator to give a notice to, or to notify, a pool participant in the Trading Schemes may be complied with by giving the notice to, or notifying, the manufacturer identified to the administrator in accordance with—
(a) paragraph 5(c)(i) of Schedule 5 (application to be treated as a pool participant) in the application made under that Schedule; or
(b) article 83(1) (updating information provided with application under Schedule 5).
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8 Pool participants in the Trading Schemes: general
(1) Each manufacturer which is a member of a pool participant in the Trading Schemes is jointly and severally liable—
(a) to comply with requirements placed on the pool participant in the Trading Schemes by or under this Order; and
(b) in respect of a financial civil penalty imposed on the pool participant in the Trading Schemes under Part 6.
(2) Paragraph (3) applies to any reference in this Order to a participant in the Trading Schemes being the manufacturer of a car, a van, a base vehicle or an SPV, where that participant is a pool participant in the Trading Schemes.
(3) A reference to which this paragraph applies is to be read as a reference to the pool participant in the Trading Schemes being the manufacturer of a car, a van, a base vehicle or an SPV, as the case may be, of which a member of the group of manufacturers making up the pool participant in the Trading Schemes is the manufacturer.
(4) Any obligation on the administrator to give a notice to, or to notify, a pool participant in the Trading Schemes may be complied with by giving the notice to, or notifying, the manufacturer identified to the administrator in accordance with—
(a) paragraph 5(c)(i) of Schedule 5 (application to be treated as a pool participant) in the application made under that Schedule; or
(b) article 83(1) (updating information provided with application under Schedule 5).
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