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Change 1
As published
96 Electronic communications
(1) In carrying out a covered procurement, a contracting authority must so far as practicable—
(a) communicate with suppliers electronically, and
(b) take steps to ensure that suppliers participating in the procurement communicate electronically.
(2) In carrying out a covered procurement, a contracting authority may only use, or require the use of, electronic communication systems that are—
(a) free of charge and readily accessible to suppliers,
(b) generally available, or interoperable with other generally available systems, and
(c) accessible to people with disabilities.
(3) Subsection (2)(a) does not apply in relation to an electronic communications system used, or required to be used—
(a) after the award of the public contract, or
(b) in relation to a utilities dynamic market.
(4) This section does not apply if the contracting authority is satisfied that electronic communication, or the use of an electronic communication system meeting the requirements of subsection (2), poses a particular security risk in the circumstances.
(5) In this section, “electronic communication system” includes any electronic system used for the purpose of communication with suppliers.
Your change, as a redline
96 Electronic communications
(1) In carrying out a covered procurement, a contracting authority must so far as practicable—
(a) communicate with suppliers electronically, and
(b) take steps to ensure that suppliers participating in the procurement communicate electronically.
(2) In carrying out a covered procurement, a contracting authority may only use, or require the use of, electronic communication systems that are—
(a) free of charge and readily accessible to suppliers,
(b) generally available, or interoperable with other generally available systems, and
(c) accessible to people with disabilities.
(3) Subsection (2)(a) does not apply in relation to an electronic communications system used, or required to be used—
(a) after the award of the public contract, or
(b) in relation to a utilities dynamic market.
(4) This section does not apply if the contracting authority is satisfied that electronic communication, or the use of an electronic communication system meeting the requirements of subsection (2), poses a particular security risk in the circumstances.
(5) In this section, “electronic communication system” includes any electronic system used for the purpose of communication with suppliers.
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