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86 Work in other capacities: complaints under the CCM, CDM or EJM
(1) This rule applies where there is a finding of misconduct on a complaint under the CCM, CDM or EJM against a clerk in Holy Orders who also carries out work in another capacity.
(2) The responsible bishop in relation to the complaint or, if the complaint is against an archbishop, the President of Tribunals must provide the information specified in paragraph (3) to—
(a) the person who employs, engages or appoints the clerk to carry out the work in the other capacity, or
(b) if it appears to the responsible bishop or the President (as the case may be) that there is no person who comes within sub-paragraph (a) but that there is a person to whom it would be appropriate to provide the information, that person.
(3) For the purposes of paragraph (2), the information is—
(a) a summary of the finding,
(b) a statement of each description of misconduct under section 3 (1) of the CCM to which the finding relates, and
(c) the penalty (if any) imposed for the misconduct.
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86 Work in other capacities: complaints under the CCM, CDM or EJM
(1) This rule applies where there is a finding of misconduct on a complaint under the CCM, CDM or EJM against a clerk in Holy Orders who also carries out work in another capacity.
(2) The responsible bishop in relation to the complaint or, if the complaint is against an archbishop, the President of Tribunals must provide the information specified in paragraph (3) to—
(a) the person who employs, engages or appoints the clerk to carry out the work in the other capacity, or
(b) if it appears to the responsible bishop or the President (as the case may be) that there is no person who comes within sub-paragraph (a) but that there is a person to whom it would be appropriate to provide the information, that person.
(3) For the purposes of paragraph (2), the information is—
(a) a summary of the finding,
(b) a statement of each description of misconduct under section 3 (1) of the CCM to which the finding relates, and
(c) the penalty (if any) imposed for the misconduct.
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