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65 Special procedure for persons already registered in a childcare register
(1) If a person who is registered as an early years childminder with or without domestic premises in the early years register, or as a later years childminder with or without domestic premises in Part A of the general childcare register, gives notice to the Chief Inspector that he wishes to be registered in Part B of the general childcare register, the Chief Inspector must—
(a) register the person in Part B of the general childcare register as a childminder (as the case may be, with or without domestic premises), and
(b) give the applicant a certificate of registration stating that he is so registered.
(2) If a person who is registered (otherwise than as a childminder) in the early years register or in Part A of the general childcare register ... gives notice to the Chief Inspector that he wishes to be registered in Part B of the general childcare register ..., the Chief Inspector must—
(a) register the person in Part B of the general childcare register as a provider of childcare other than a childminder ... , and
(b) give the person a certificate of registration stating that he is so registered.
(3) Subsections (3) to (5) of section 64 apply in relation to a certificate of registration given in pursuance of subsection (1) or (2) of this section as they apply in relation to a certificate of registration given in pursuance of subsection (1) or (2) of that section.
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65 Special procedure for persons already registered in a childcare register
(1) If a person who is registered as an early years childminder with or without domestic premises in the early years register, or as a later years childminder with or without domestic premises in Part A of the general childcare register, gives notice to the Chief Inspector that he wishes to be registered in Part B of the general childcare register, the Chief Inspector must—
(a) register the person in Part B of the general childcare register as a childminder (as the case may be, with or without domestic premises), and
(b) give the applicant a certificate of registration stating that he is so registered.
(2) If a person who is registered (otherwise than as a childminder) in the early years register or in Part A of the general childcare register ... gives notice to the Chief Inspector that he wishes to be registered in Part B of the general childcare register ..., the Chief Inspector must—
(a) register the person in Part B of the general childcare register as a provider of childcare other than a childminder ... , and
(b) give the person a certificate of registration stating that he is so registered.
(3) Subsections (3) to (5) of section 64 apply in relation to a certificate of registration given in pursuance of subsection (1) or (2) of this section as they apply in relation to a certificate of registration given in pursuance of subsection (1) or (2) of that section.
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