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Change 1
As published
34 Correction of register.
(1) The Registrar may, on request made in the prescribed manner by the registered proprietor,—
(a) correct any error in the name or address of the registered proprietor of a trade mark;
(b) enter any change in the name or address of the person who is registered as proprietor of a trade mark;
(c) cancel the entry of a trade mark on the register;
(d) strike out any goods or classes of goods from those in respect of which a trade mark is registered; or
(e) enter a disclaimer or memorandum relating to a trade mark which does not in any way extend the rights given by the existing registration of the trade mark.
(2) The Registrar may, on request made in the prescribed manner by a registered user of a trade mark, correct any error, or enter any change, in the name or address of the registered user.
(3) Any decision of the Registrar under this section shall be subject to appeal to the Board of Trade, or to the Court, at the option of the appellant.
Your change, as a redline
34 Correction of register.
(1) The Registrar may, on request made in the prescribed manner by the registered proprietor,—
(a) correct any error in the name or address of the registered proprietor of a trade mark;
(b) enter any change in the name or address of the person who is registered as proprietor of a trade mark;
(c) cancel the entry of a trade mark on the register;
(d) strike out any goods or classes of goods from those in respect of which a trade mark is registered; or
(e) enter a disclaimer or memorandum relating to a trade mark which does not in any way extend the rights given by the existing registration of the trade mark.
(2) The Registrar may, on request made in the prescribed manner by a registered user of a trade mark, correct any error, or enter any change, in the name or address of the registered user.
(3) Any decision of the Registrar under this section shall be subject to appeal to the Board of Trade, or to the Court, at the option of the appellant.
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