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Change 1
As published
46 Equipment of smallholdings.
(1) A smallholdings authority shall have power to provide, improve, maintain and repair fixed equipment on land held by the authority for the purposes of smallholdings, and to carry out any other improvements on or for the benefit of any such land.
(2) The power conferred by the foregoing subsection shall include power to enter into an agreement with a tenant of any such land for—
(a) the provision, improvement, maintenance or repair by the tenant of fixed equipment on the land, or
(b) the carrying out by the tenant of other improvements on or for the benefit of the land,
on such terms as may be specified in the agreement.
Your change, as a redline
46 Equipment of smallholdings.
(1) A smallholdings authority shall have power to provide, improve, maintain and repair fixed equipment on land held by the authority for the purposes of smallholdings, and to carry out any other improvements on or for the benefit of any such land.
(2) The power conferred by the foregoing subsection shall include power to enter into an agreement with a tenant of any such land for—
(a) the provision, improvement, maintenance or repair by the tenant of fixed equipment on the land, or
(b) the carrying out by the tenant of other improvements on or for the benefit of the land,
on such terms as may be specified in the agreement.
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