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Change 1
As published
19 Notice of decisions.
(1) If the registration authority decides to grant an application for registration in respect of an establishment or agency unconditionally, or subject only to conditions which have been agreed in writing between it and the applicant, it shall give the applicant written notice of its decision.
(2) A notice under subsection (1) shall state the agreed conditions.
(3) If the registration authority decides to adopt a proposal under section 17, it shall serve notice in writing of its decision on any person on whom it was required to serve notice of the proposal.
(4) A notice under subsection (3) shall—
(a) explain the right of appeal conferred by section 21;
(b) in the case of a decision to adopt a proposal under section 17(2), state the conditions subject to which the application is granted; . . .
(ba) in the case of a decision to adopt a proposal under section 17(4)(aa), state the period (or extended period) of suspension; and
(c) in the case of a decision to adopt a proposal under section 17(4)(b) or (c), state the condition as varied, the condition which is removed or (as the case may be) the additional condition imposed.
(5) Subject to subsection (6), a decision of the registration authority to adopt a proposal under section 17(2) or (4) shall not take effect—
(a) if no appeal is brought, until the expiration of the period of 28 days referred to in section 21(2); and
(b) if an appeal is brought, until it is determined or abandoned.
(6) Where, in the case of a decision to adopt a proposal under section 17(2), the applicant notifies the registration authority in writing before the expiration of the period mentioned in subsection (5)(a) that he does not intend to appeal, the decision shall take effect when the notice is served.
Your change, as a redline
19 Notice of decisions.
(1) If the registration authority decides to grant an application for registration in respect of an establishment or agency unconditionally, or subject only to conditions which have been agreed in writing between it and the applicant, it shall give the applicant written notice of its decision.
(2) A notice under subsection (1) shall state the agreed conditions.
(3) If the registration authority decides to adopt a proposal under section 17, it shall serve notice in writing of its decision on any person on whom it was required to serve notice of the proposal.
(4) A notice under subsection (3) shall—
(a) explain the right of appeal conferred by section 21;
(b) in the case of a decision to adopt a proposal under section 17(2), state the conditions subject to which the application is granted; . . .
(ba) in the case of a decision to adopt a proposal under section 17(4)(aa), state the period (or extended period) of suspension; and
(c) in the case of a decision to adopt a proposal under section 17(4)(b) or (c), state the condition as varied, the condition which is removed or (as the case may be) the additional condition imposed.
(5) Subject to subsection (6), a decision of the registration authority to adopt a proposal under section 17(2) or (4) shall not take effect—
(a) if no appeal is brought, until the expiration of the period of 28 days referred to in section 21(2); and
(b) if an appeal is brought, until it is determined or abandoned.
(6) Where, in the case of a decision to adopt a proposal under section 17(2), the applicant notifies the registration authority in writing before the expiration of the period mentioned in subsection (5)(a) that he does not intend to appeal, the decision shall take effect when the notice is served.
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