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8 Agreements as to provision of sewers etc. for new premises.
(1) Subject to subsection (2) below, where Scottish Water is satisfied that premises are to be constructed within its area by any person, it may enter into an agreement with that person as respects the provision by that person or by it of sewers , SUD systems and sewage treatment works to serve those premises, and any such agreement may specify the terms and conditions on which the work is to be carried out, including provision as to the taking over by Scottish Water of SUD systems and sewage treatment works so provided, and, in relation to any premises served or to be served by the sewers , SUD systems or works, shall be enforceable against Scottish Water by the owner or occupier of the premises for the time being.
(2) An agreement under the foregoing subsection may only be entered into by Scottish Water where it has no duty under section 1 above to provide public sewers to serve the premises.
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8 Agreements as to provision of sewers etc. for new premises.
(1) Subject to subsection (2) below, where Scottish Water is satisfied that premises are to be constructed within its area by any person, it may enter into an agreement with that person as respects the provision by that person or by it of sewers , SUD systems and sewage treatment works to serve those premises, and any such agreement may specify the terms and conditions on which the work is to be carried out, including provision as to the taking over by Scottish Water of SUD systems and sewage treatment works so provided, and, in relation to any premises served or to be served by the sewers , SUD systems or works, shall be enforceable against Scottish Water by the owner or occupier of the premises for the time being.
(2) An agreement under the foregoing subsection may only be entered into by Scottish Water where it has no duty under section 1 above to provide public sewers to serve the premises.
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