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As published
66 Register of rents.
(1) For each registration area, a register for the purposes of this Part of this Act shall be prepared and kept up to date by the rent officer.
(1A) The rent officer shall make the register available for inspection in such place or places and in such manner–
(a) if the area is not specified in an order made under section 64B of this Act, as may be provided by the scheme made for the area under section 63 of this Act;
(b) if the area is so specified, as the Secretary of State may direct.
(2) The register shall contain, in addition to the rent payable under a regulated tenancy of a dwelling-house—
(a) the prescribed particulars with regard to the tenancy; and
(b) a specification of the dwelling-house.
(3) A copy of an entry in the register certified under the hand of the rent officer or any person duly authorised by him shall be receivable in evidence in any court and in any proceedings.
(4) A person requiring such a certified copy shall be entitled to obtain it on payment of the prescribed fee.
Your change, as a redline
66 Register of rents.
(1) For each registration area, a register for the purposes of this Part of this Act shall be prepared and kept up to date by the rent officer.
(1A) The rent officer shall make the register available for inspection in such place or places and in such manner–
(a) if the area is not specified in an order made under section 64B of this Act, as may be provided by the scheme made for the area under section 63 of this Act;
(b) if the area is so specified, as the Secretary of State may direct.
(2) The register shall contain, in addition to the rent payable under a regulated tenancy of a dwelling-house—
(a) the prescribed particulars with regard to the tenancy; and
(b) a specification of the dwelling-house.
(3) A copy of an entry in the register certified under the hand of the rent officer or any person duly authorised by him shall be receivable in evidence in any court and in any proceedings.
(4) A person requiring such a certified copy shall be entitled to obtain it on payment of the prescribed fee.
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