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Change 1
As published
32A Licences under Part 1A
(1) Subject to the modifications mentioned in subsection (2), Part 1 applies in relation to—
(a) a relevant permanent site as it applies to a caravan site within the meaning of section 1(4),
(b) a relevant permanent site application as it applies in relation to an application for a site licence under Part 1, and
(c) a site licence issued or renewed under this Part (a “Part 1A site licence”) as it applies to a site licence within the meaning of section 1(1).
(2) The modifications are—
(a) the offence in section 1 does not apply to the holder of a Part 1A site licence in relation to that person's use of the relevant permanent site which is the subject of the licence,
(b) sections 3 and 6 do not apply in relation to a relevant permanent site application,
(c) sections 4 and 9 do not apply in relation to a Part 1A site licence, and
(d) the further modifications in this Part.
Your change, as a redline
32A Licences under Part 1A
(1) Subject to the modifications mentioned in subsection (2), Part 1 applies in relation to—
(a) a relevant permanent site as it applies to a caravan site within the meaning of section 1(4),
(b) a relevant permanent site application as it applies in relation to an application for a site licence under Part 1, and
(c) a site licence issued or renewed under this Part (a “Part 1A site licence”) as it applies to a site licence within the meaning of section 1(1).
(2) The modifications are—
(a) the offence in section 1 does not apply to the holder of a Part 1A site licence in relation to that person's use of the relevant permanent site which is the subject of the licence,
(b) sections 3 and 6 do not apply in relation to a relevant permanent site application,
(c) sections 4 and 9 do not apply in relation to a Part 1A site licence, and
(d) the further modifications in this Part.
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