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32I Notification of decision on Part 1A site licence
(1) A local authority must, as soon as practicable after making a decision mentioned in subsection (2), notify the persons mentioned in subsection (3) of—
(a) the making of the decision, and
(b) the right to appeal under section 32M.
(2) The decisions are—
(a) the determination of a relevant permanent site application,
(b) the determination of an application for consent to transfer a licence mentioned in section 32E,
(c) the decision to transfer a licence mentioned in section 32G.
(3) The persons are—
(a) in the case of a determination of a relevant permanent site application, the applicant,
(b) in the case of a determination of an application for consent to transfer a licence mentioned in section 32E, the applicant and the transferee,
(c) in the case of a decision of the local authority to transfer a licence under section 32G, the previous holder of the Part 1A site licence and the transferee.
(4) A local authority must give to the persons mentioned in subsection (3) its reasons for making a decision mentioned in subsection (2).
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32I Notification of decision on Part 1A site licence
(1) A local authority must, as soon as practicable after making a decision mentioned in subsection (2), notify the persons mentioned in subsection (3) of—
(a) the making of the decision, and
(b) the right to appeal under section 32M.
(2) The decisions are—
(a) the determination of a relevant permanent site application,
(b) the determination of an application for consent to transfer a licence mentioned in section 32E,
(c) the decision to transfer a licence mentioned in section 32G.
(3) The persons are—
(a) in the case of a determination of a relevant permanent site application, the applicant,
(b) in the case of a determination of an application for consent to transfer a licence mentioned in section 32E, the applicant and the transferee,
(c) in the case of a decision of the local authority to transfer a licence under section 32G, the previous holder of the Part 1A site licence and the transferee.
(4) A local authority must give to the persons mentioned in subsection (3) its reasons for making a decision mentioned in subsection (2).
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