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Change 1
As published
32J Duration of a Part 1A site licence
(1) A Part 1A site licence—
(a) comes into operation at the time specified in or determined under the licence, and
(b) unless terminated by its revocation, continues in force until—
(i) the licence holder is not entitled to the benefit of planning permission for the use of the land as a caravan site, or any planning permission for the use of the relevant permanent site as a caravan site expires, or
(ii) if earlier, the day which is 5 years after the day on which the licence comes into operation.
(2) The Scottish Ministers may, by order subject to the affirmative procedure, amend subsection (1)(b)(ii) so as to substitute for the figure for the time being specified there a different figure.
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32J Duration of a Part 1A site licence
(1) A Part 1A site licence—
(a) comes into operation at the time specified in or determined under the licence, and
(b) unless terminated by its revocation, continues in force until—
(i) the licence holder is not entitled to the benefit of planning permission for the use of the land as a caravan site, or any planning permission for the use of the relevant permanent site as a caravan site expires, or
(ii) if earlier, the day which is 5 years after the day on which the licence comes into operation.
(2) The Scottish Ministers may, by order subject to the affirmative procedure, amend subsection (1)(b)(ii) so as to substitute for the figure for the time being specified there a different figure.
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