Write the words of this act the way you think they should read. Solon shows your change as a redline against the published text and pins it to that exact text, so it can never be applied to wording you did not see.
Change 1
As published
32M Appeals relating to a Part 1A site licence
(1) A person mentioned in subsection (2) may by summary application appeal to the sheriff against—
(a) the refusal by the local authority to issue or renew a Part 1A site licence following a relevant permanent site application,
(b) the determination by the local authority of an application for consent to transfer a licence mentioned in section 32E,
(c) the decision by the local authority to transfer a licence mentioned in section 32G,
(d) the decision by the local authority to revoke a Part 1A site licence under section 32L.
(2) The persons are—
(a) in the case of a determination of a relevant permanent site application, the applicant,
(b) in the case of a determination of an application for consent to transfer a licence mentioned in section 32E—
(i) the applicant,
(ii) the transferee,
(c) in the case of a decision by the local authority to transfer a licence mentioned in section 32G—
(i) the previous holder of the Part 1A site licence,
(ii) the transferee,
(d) in the case of a decision of the local authority to revoke a Part 1A site licence under section 32L, the person who held the licence.
Your change, as a redline
32M Appeals relating to a Part 1A site licence
(1) A person mentioned in subsection (2) may by summary application appeal to the sheriff against—
(a) the refusal by the local authority to issue or renew a Part 1A site licence following a relevant permanent site application,
(b) the determination by the local authority of an application for consent to transfer a licence mentioned in section 32E,
(c) the decision by the local authority to transfer a licence mentioned in section 32G,
(d) the decision by the local authority to revoke a Part 1A site licence under section 32L.
(2) The persons are—
(a) in the case of a determination of a relevant permanent site application, the applicant,
(b) in the case of a determination of an application for consent to transfer a licence mentioned in section 32E—
(i) the applicant,
(ii) the transferee,
(c) in the case of a decision by the local authority to transfer a licence mentioned in section 32G—
(i) the previous holder of the Part 1A site licence,
(ii) the transferee,
(d) in the case of a decision of the local authority to revoke a Part 1A site licence under section 32L, the person who held the licence.
One line that says what changes, such as "Halve the dog tax".
Who it helps, what it costs, what it fixes. It is what persuades people to support it.
A proposal here is not law. Support on Solon is evidence that people want the change; the official route says what it takes to make it law.
Sign in to file your proposal. What you have written stays on this page.
Ask what your change would do, who would gain and who would bear a cost, and where something like it is already law. The assistant reads your draft as it stands, cites the law and the studies it finds, and takes no side. What you file stays yours.