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EIGHTH SCHEDULE AMENDMENT OF ENACTMENTS.
Section 120.
PART I ENACTMENTS AMENDED FROM DATE OF COMMENCEMENT OF PART II OF THIS ACT.
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The Mental Deficiency Act, 1913
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The Ministry of Agriculture and Fisheries Act, 1919
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The Children and Young Persons Act, 1933.
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Section ninety-six | In subsection (1), the words “as respects children” and the words from “for elementary education” (where those words first occur) to the end of the subsection shall be omitted ; subsection (2) shall be omitted ; in subsection (3) for the words from “for elementary education” to the end of the subsection there shall be substituted the words “shall be defrayed as expenses under the enactments relating to education” ; in subsection (4), for the word “under” (where that word secondly occurs) there shall be substituted the words “in accordance with”, and the words “as expenses of elementary education under the Education Act, 1921” shall be omitted.
PART II ENACTMENTS AMENDED FROM DATE ON WHICH SECTION FORTY-FOUR OF THIS ACT COMES INTO OPERATION . . .
Your change, as a redline
EIGHTH SCHEDULE AMENDMENT OF ENACTMENTS.
Section 120.
PART I ENACTMENTS AMENDED FROM DATE OF COMMENCEMENT OF PART II OF THIS ACT.
Enactment to be amended. | Amendment.
The Mental Deficiency Act, 1913
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The Ministry of Agriculture and Fisheries Act, 1919
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The Children and Young Persons Act, 1933.
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Section ninety-six | In subsection (1), the words “as respects children” and the words from “for elementary education” (where those words first occur) to the end of the subsection shall be omitted ; subsection (2) shall be omitted ; in subsection (3) for the words from “for elementary education” to the end of the subsection there shall be substituted the words “shall be defrayed as expenses under the enactments relating to education” ; in subsection (4), for the word “under” (where that word secondly occurs) there shall be substituted the words “in accordance with”, and the words “as expenses of elementary education under the Education Act, 1921” shall be omitted.
PART II ENACTMENTS AMENDED FROM DATE ON WHICH SECTION FORTY-FOUR OF THIS ACT COMES INTO OPERATION . . .
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