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SECOND SCHEDULE TRANSFER TO A LOCAL EDUCATION AUTHORITY OF AN INTEREST IN THE PREMISES OF A VOLUNTARY SCHOOL
1 A local education authority and the . . . governors of any voluntary school maintained by the authority may, subject to and in accordance with the provisions of this Schedule, make an agreement for the transfer to the authority of any interest in the school premises held by any persons for the purposes of any trust deed relating to the school.
2 No such agreement shall take effect unless it has been approved by the Secretary of State for Education and Science .
3 The Secretary of State for Education and Science shall not approve any such agreement unless he is satisfied—
(a) that due notice of the agreement has been given to any persons other than the . . . governors of the school who, by virtue of any trust deed relating to the school, have an interest therein and to any other persons who appear to the Secretary of State for Education and Science to be concerned; and
(b) that the execution of the agreement will effect the transfer of all interests necessary for the purpose of enabling the authority to maintain the school as a county school.
4 Before approving any such agreement, the Secretary of State for Education and Science shall consider any representations made to him by or on behalf of any persons appearing to the Secretary of State for Education and Science to be concerned with the proposed transfer.
5 An agreement under this Schedule may provide for the transfer to the authority, subject to such conditions, reservations and restrictions, if any, as may be specified in the agreement, of the whole of the interest in the premises held by any persons for the purposes of any trust deed relating to the school, or of any less interest in the premises, and may include such other provisions, whether relating to the consideration for the said transfer or otherwise, as may be agreed upon between the authority and the . . . governors of the school.
6 Where any agreement made under this Schedule has been approved by the Secretary of State for Education and Science, the . . . governors of the school may, whether or not the interest to be transferred to the authority by virtue of the agreement is vested in them, convey that interest to the authority.
7 Where any person other than the . . . governors of the school has a right to the occupation or use of the school premises or any part thereof for any particular purpose, no provision of any agreement made under this Schedule shall affect that right unless he has consented thereto.
8 In this Schedule, the expression “premises” includes a teacher’s dwelling-house.
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SECOND SCHEDULE TRANSFER TO A LOCAL EDUCATION AUTHORITY OF AN INTEREST IN THE PREMISES OF A VOLUNTARY SCHOOL
1 A local education authority and the . . . governors of any voluntary school maintained by the authority may, subject to and in accordance with the provisions of this Schedule, make an agreement for the transfer to the authority of any interest in the school premises held by any persons for the purposes of any trust deed relating to the school.
2 No such agreement shall take effect unless it has been approved by the Secretary of State for Education and Science .
3 The Secretary of State for Education and Science shall not approve any such agreement unless he is satisfied—
(a) that due notice of the agreement has been given to any persons other than the . . . governors of the school who, by virtue of any trust deed relating to the school, have an interest therein and to any other persons who appear to the Secretary of State for Education and Science to be concerned; and
(b) that the execution of the agreement will effect the transfer of all interests necessary for the purpose of enabling the authority to maintain the school as a county school.
4 Before approving any such agreement, the Secretary of State for Education and Science shall consider any representations made to him by or on behalf of any persons appearing to the Secretary of State for Education and Science to be concerned with the proposed transfer.
5 An agreement under this Schedule may provide for the transfer to the authority, subject to such conditions, reservations and restrictions, if any, as may be specified in the agreement, of the whole of the interest in the premises held by any persons for the purposes of any trust deed relating to the school, or of any less interest in the premises, and may include such other provisions, whether relating to the consideration for the said transfer or otherwise, as may be agreed upon between the authority and the . . . governors of the school.
6 Where any agreement made under this Schedule has been approved by the Secretary of State for Education and Science, the . . . governors of the school may, whether or not the interest to be transferred to the authority by virtue of the agreement is vested in them, convey that interest to the authority.
7 Where any person other than the . . . governors of the school has a right to the occupation or use of the school premises or any part thereof for any particular purpose, no provision of any agreement made under this Schedule shall affect that right unless he has consented thereto.
8 In this Schedule, the expression “premises” includes a teacher’s dwelling-house.
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