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As published
78 Provision of certain ancillary services for pupils not in attendance at schools maintained by local education authorities.
(1) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
(2) A local education authority may, with the consent of the proprietor of any school in their area which is not a school maintained by the authority, and upon such financial and other terms, if any, as may be determined by agreement between the authority and the proprietor of the school, make arrangements for securing—
(a) the provision of milk, meals and other refreshment for pupils in attendance at the school; . . .
Provided that any arrangements made under this subsection shall be such as to secure, so far as is practicable, that the expense incurred by the authority in connection with the provision under the arrangements of any service or article shall not exceed the expense which would have been incurred by them in the provision thereof if the pupil had been a pupil at a school maintained by them.
Your change, as a redline
78 Provision of certain ancillary services for pupils not in attendance at schools maintained by local education authorities.
(1) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
(2) A local education authority may, with the consent of the proprietor of any school in their area which is not a school maintained by the authority, and upon such financial and other terms, if any, as may be determined by agreement between the authority and the proprietor of the school, make arrangements for securing—
(a) the provision of milk, meals and other refreshment for pupils in attendance at the school; . . .
Provided that any arrangements made under this subsection shall be such as to secure, so far as is practicable, that the expense incurred by the authority in connection with the provision under the arrangements of any service or article shall not exceed the expense which would have been incurred by them in the provision thereof if the pupil had been a pupil at a school maintained by them.
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