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As published
80 Registration of pupils at schools.
(1) The proprietor of every school (that is to say in the case of a county school or voluntary school the . . . governors thereof and in the case of a grant-maintained school the governing body of the school) shall cause to be kept in accordance with regulations made by the Secretary of State for Education and Science a register containing the prescribed particulars with respect to all persons . . . who are pupils at the school, and such regulations may make provision for enabling such registers to be inspected, for enabling extracts therefrom to be taken for the purposes of this Act by persons duly authorised in that behalf under the regulations, and for requiring the persons by whom any such register is required to be kept to make to the Secretary of State to the funding authorities for Education and Science, and to local education authorities, such periodical or other returns as to the contents thereof as may be prescribed.
(1A) Without prejudice to the generality of subsection (1) of this section, the prescribed particulars shall include particulars of the name and address of every person known to the proprietor of the school to be a parent of a pupil at the school.
(2) If any person contravenes or fails to comply with any requirement imposed on him by regulations made under this section, he shall be liable on summary conviction to a fine not exceeding level 1 on the standard scale.
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Your change, as a redline
80 Registration of pupils at schools.
(1) The proprietor of every school (that is to say in the case of a county school or voluntary school the . . . governors thereof and in the case of a grant-maintained school the governing body of the school) shall cause to be kept in accordance with regulations made by the Secretary of State for Education and Science a register containing the prescribed particulars with respect to all persons . . . who are pupils at the school, and such regulations may make provision for enabling such registers to be inspected, for enabling extracts therefrom to be taken for the purposes of this Act by persons duly authorised in that behalf under the regulations, and for requiring the persons by whom any such register is required to be kept to make to the Secretary of State to the funding authorities for Education and Science, and to local education authorities, such periodical or other returns as to the contents thereof as may be prescribed.
(1A) Without prejudice to the generality of subsection (1) of this section, the prescribed particulars shall include particulars of the name and address of every person known to the proprietor of the school to be a parent of a pupil at the school.
(2) If any person contravenes or fails to comply with any requirement imposed on him by regulations made under this section, he shall be liable on summary conviction to a fine not exceeding level 1 on the standard scale.
(3) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
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