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33J Special provision for certain institutions
(1) Despite anything in section 33I, the instrument of government of a sixth form college corporation to which this section applies must provide—
(a) for the governing body of the relevant sixth form college to include persons appointed for the purpose of securing so far as practicable that the established character of the sixth form college is preserved and developed and, in particular, that the sixth form college is conducted in accordance with any trust deed relating to it, and
(b) for the majority of members of the governing body of the relevant sixth form college to be such governors.
(1A) A sixth form college corporation to which this section applies may (accordingly) conduct the relevant sixth form college in a way that secures that the established character of the sixth form college is preserved and developed (and, in particular, in a way that is in accordance with any trust deed relating to the college).
(2) This section applies to a sixth form college corporation in respect of which the relevant sixth form college is specified, or falls within a class specified, by the Secretary of State by order.
(3) The references in subsections (1)(a) and (1A) to the established character of a sixth form college are , in relation to a sixth form college established shortly before or at the same time as the designation or establishment of the sixth form college corporation in respect of which it is the relevant sixth form college, references to the character which the sixth form college is intended to have on its establishment.
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33J Special provision for certain institutions
(1) Despite anything in section 33I, the instrument of government of a sixth form college corporation to which this section applies must provide—
(a) for the governing body of the relevant sixth form college to include persons appointed for the purpose of securing so far as practicable that the established character of the sixth form college is preserved and developed and, in particular, that the sixth form college is conducted in accordance with any trust deed relating to it, and
(b) for the majority of members of the governing body of the relevant sixth form college to be such governors.
(1A) A sixth form college corporation to which this section applies may (accordingly) conduct the relevant sixth form college in a way that secures that the established character of the sixth form college is preserved and developed (and, in particular, in a way that is in accordance with any trust deed relating to the college).
(2) This section applies to a sixth form college corporation in respect of which the relevant sixth form college is specified, or falls within a class specified, by the Secretary of State by order.
(3) The references in subsections (1)(a) and (1A) to the established character of a sixth form college are , in relation to a sixth form college established shortly before or at the same time as the designation or establishment of the sixth form college corporation in respect of which it is the relevant sixth form college, references to the character which the sixth form college is intended to have on its establishment.
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