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As published
50 Information with respect to institutions within the further education sector.
(1) The Secretary of State may by regulations require the governing body of any institution within the further education sector to publish such information as may be prescribed about—
(a) the educational provision made or proposed to be made for their students,
(b) the educational achievements of their students on entry to the institution and the educational achievements of their students while at the institution (including in each case the results of examinations, tests and other assessments),
(c) the financial and other resources of the institution and the effectiveness of the use made of such resources, and
(d) the careers of their students after completing any course or leaving the institution.
(2) For the purposes of subsection (1)(d) above, a person’s career includes any education, training, employment or occupation; and the regulations may in particular require the published information to show—
(a) the numbers of students not undertaking any career, and
(b) the persons providing students with education, training or employment.
(3) The information shall be published in such form and manner and at such times as may be prescribed.
(4) The published information shall not name any student to whom it relates.
(5) In this section “prescribed” means prescribed by regulations.
Your change, as a redline
50 Information with respect to institutions within the further education sector.
(1) The Secretary of State may by regulations require the governing body of any institution within the further education sector to publish such information as may be prescribed about—
(a) the educational provision made or proposed to be made for their students,
(b) the educational achievements of their students on entry to the institution and the educational achievements of their students while at the institution (including in each case the results of examinations, tests and other assessments),
(c) the financial and other resources of the institution and the effectiveness of the use made of such resources, and
(d) the careers of their students after completing any course or leaving the institution.
(2) For the purposes of subsection (1)(d) above, a person’s career includes any education, training, employment or occupation; and the regulations may in particular require the published information to show—
(a) the numbers of students not undertaking any career, and
(b) the persons providing students with education, training or employment.
(3) The information shall be published in such form and manner and at such times as may be prescribed.
(4) The published information shall not name any student to whom it relates.
(5) In this section “prescribed” means prescribed by regulations.
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