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As published
19A Indirect discrimination: same disadvantage
(1) A person (A) discriminates against another (B) if—
(a) A applies to B a provision, criterion or practice,
(b) A also applies, or would apply, the provision, criterion or practice to—
(i) persons who share a relevant protected characteristic, and
(ii) persons who do not share that relevant protected characteristic,
(c) B does not share that relevant protected characteristic,
(d) the provision, criterion or practice puts, or would put, persons with the relevant protected characteristic at a particular disadvantage when compared with persons who do not share the relevant protected characteristic,
(e) the provision, criterion or practice puts, or would put, B at substantively the same disadvantage as persons who do share the relevant protected characteristic, and
(f) A cannot show that the provision, criterion or practice is a proportionate means of achieving a legitimate aim.
(2) The relevant protected characteristics for the purposes of this section are—
age;
disability;
gender reassignment;
marriage and civil partnership;
race;
religion or belief;
sex;
sexual orientation.
Your change, as a redline
19A Indirect discrimination: same disadvantage
(1) A person (A) discriminates against another (B) if—
(a) A applies to B a provision, criterion or practice,
(b) A also applies, or would apply, the provision, criterion or practice to—
(i) persons who share a relevant protected characteristic, and
(ii) persons who do not share that relevant protected characteristic,
(c) B does not share that relevant protected characteristic,
(d) the provision, criterion or practice puts, or would put, persons with the relevant protected characteristic at a particular disadvantage when compared with persons who do not share the relevant protected characteristic,
(e) the provision, criterion or practice puts, or would put, B at substantively the same disadvantage as persons who do share the relevant protected characteristic, and
(f) A cannot show that the provision, criterion or practice is a proportionate means of achieving a legitimate aim.
(2) The relevant protected characteristics for the purposes of this section are—
age;
disability;
gender reassignment;
marriage and civil partnership;
race;
religion or belief;
sex;
sexual orientation.
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